The most common problem in IELTS writing is the balance of writing between grammatical range and accuracy. This is where most of the students loose marks and hence fail their IELTS writing task
Let us see how you mange in balancing this is your Essay?
"We live in a technological age. However, technology cannot solve all the
worlds problems. Therefore some people argue that we need to place less
emphasis on technological solutions and more on other values".
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
NOTE: I will mark and give my feedback on the first 10 essays I receive